Persuasive Writing - why we should have pets

We have been having a go at writing a piece of Persuasive writing.Here is my piece of writing about why we should have pets.

Title A Short Statement about the topic. eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’	Pets Are Good !
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	I strongly believe everyone should have a pet. If you want a good time in your life.
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	Firstly, pets are fun to play with especially if the pet is a dog or a cat because if it is a dog you can play pacific dog games like fetch. If it’s a cat you can play with a toy from a shop like a fake mouse. Some people like to take their dog on a work in the afternoon on the beach or  in the bush on a bush work.
	Secondly, pets can be very comforting  when you are down or sad.  Most people like it when their pet comes with them to bed and came to the television lounge.
	Thirdly,pets are used for pacific jobs like a guard dog, farm dog, and a police dog. If we didn't have these dogs we wouldn't have a good world. The list goes on with dog careers.
	Finally, cats and dogs can kill pests like rats and stoats. The pests and rodents kill the environment and native birds. some of the birds only live in NZ and some are close to .
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.	In conclusion, I think that people should have pets because pets are fun to play with, pets are good at comforting you, pets can be trained to do specific jobs and pets can kill  pests and rodents .