In this task me and a couple of friends “tried” to make a poem like Brian
Bilston. When you read it down is is against refugees and when you read
it up you are for refugees.
Bilston. When you read it down is is against refugees and when you read
it up you are for refugees.
This poem is not made to offend anybody in anyway.
Refugees
They do not need our help
Do not tell us
These fake stories
These hungry faces
Cold blooded bombers
From both sides
Waiting for the right moment
To seek rights
To risk freedoms
Locals are causing havoc
With there dirty little lies
They are Escaping from disaster
No power no water
Don't give them anything
You say.
(Now read from bottom to top)
The Refugee poem was created by Max, Grace and Sam
this poem was made to make people think that he is against
Refugees but if you read the last line it states (Now read
from bottom to top) than it read like he is for Refugees.
this poem was made to make people think that he is against
Refugees but if you read the last line it states (Now read
from bottom to top) than it read like he is for Refugees.
Hi there Sam,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Viva. I attend Panmure Bridge School. I really like your story of the boy that is against refugees, why? because I like the fact that in the end you said "now read from bottom to top". I think that you have did a superb job in writing this little story with your class mates Mat and Grace. But maybe next time, I suggest that you should use the word their for a group or a pair of people, and use the word there for the landscape or the place you could be pointing at. For example: I saw the great view at the beach, once I sat down with my family for the picnic I saw their friends stop by and say "Hello!". The example of the word there: I sat down and a few minutes later my brother pointed in that direction over there. Hopefully you know the differences between their and there.
But besides that, Keep up the superb work Sam.