Thursday 27 October 2016

Magic Box Poem


5 comments:

  1. Hi Sam,
    Your writing is very bold. You have a lot of colour that makes your work even better. Next time you should add another slide.

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    1. Hi this is Sam from Karoro School.Thank you for commenting on my Magic Box poem, and thanks for the helpful comment about adding another slide.

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  2. Kia Ora Sam it's Callum from Grey Main. Your mihi is really clear but next time maybe learn the words properly. Visit my blog and see my mihi.

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  3. Hi Callum. It is Sam from Karoro School. Thank you for the comment. You were helpful,respecful and kind, I would really like to visit your blog. From Sam.

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  4. kia ora Sam my name is Regan from grey main school I like your work i really ilke it.

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