Kia ora Sam, I think that you and David did a good job and that you met the criteria.
I really like your poem and that it describes well what a bee does during the day. I also like how the last two line rhyme. I like how you have labelled what activity it is so that you can find that easily.
I like your insect web but next time maybe you could pick a specific insect and do one on them.
Maybe next time you could try and take the photos up close so that you can read and see what is on them.
Over all I think that you did a great job and your poem was my favourite bit.
Kia ora Sam,
ReplyDeleteI think that you and David did a good job and that you met the criteria.
I really like your poem and that it describes well what a bee does during the day. I also like how the last two line rhyme. I like how you have labelled what activity it is so that you can find that easily.
I like your insect web but next time maybe you could pick a specific insect and do one on them.
Maybe next time you could try and take the photos up close so that you can read and see what is on them.
Over all I think that you did a great job and your poem was my favourite bit.