Tuesday 14 March 2017

My Sea Week Writing

For sea week we wrote about why the ocean is important. Here is my writing work. Please leave a kind, positive and thoughtful comment.
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  1. Anonymous16 March 2017 at 14:56

    Kiora Sam, I really enjoyed your sea week writing. I like how you explained a lot in your writing. Next time you could make a video of you reading your sea week writing instead of just playing your slideshow. From Dakota

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  2. Anonymous21 March 2017 at 17:31

    Hi Sam, well I have finally found where to comment on your amazing school work. It's great seeing how much you love the ocean but you really didn't have much choice there considering we virtually live on the beach and those crazy parents of yours (well mum anyway) make sure you get out there and enjoy it. Anyway you have done a great job describing why the ocean is important to everyone and what we can do to protect it. Keep up the good work, Dad.

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  3. Anonymous27 March 2017 at 14:47

    Thanks for commenting on my work Dad, I enjoyed writing about Sea week. I'll keep up the good work and playing outside. Sam

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